My Original Comic

[A Friendly Hoovy]

Hello, I am looking for advice on my comic. I think I could turn it into a multimedia franchise if I play my cards right, maybe even have Nintendo make a videogame. Constructive criticism only please.

This is the cover of the first issue.

Spoiler: Original Comic DO NOT STEAL

 

[NiggerNiggerNiggerNigger]

Might need to work on your line work buddy, but I see potential.

 

[A Friendly Hoovy]

Might need to work on your line work buddy, but I see potential.

I will try, I have only been drawing it for 16 years, so I am still learning the basics.

 

[cybertron]

What one of the poll options says , "plagiarism is a sin" . Also Sonichu parodies are dime a dozen these days.

 

[Merely an Ass]

I think it is a good idea and I hope to see more in the future of this glorious website.

 

[snailslime]

mine is better

pls don't come after me fbi, i didn't make this masterpiece

 

[Plateletpheresis]

 

[Cedric_Eff]

Interesting comic idea there bud.